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Perfect Two x Two

Journal Entry: Sun Jan 15, 2012, 11:27 AM


Original by Auburn:

"Don't know if I could ever be
Without you cause boy you complete me
And in time I know that we'll both see
That we're all we need
Cause you're the apple to me pie
You're the straw to my berry
You're the smoke to my high
And you're the one I wanna marry
Cause you're the one for me, for me
And I'm the one for you, for you
You take the both of us, of us
And we're the perfect two yeah
We're the perfect two (x2)
Baby me and you
We're the perfect two...


VS. Break-Up Version by Kayla Hang:

Don't think that I could ever be
Able to stay with you now baby
Cause in time I know that we'll both see
We're not meant to be
Cause you're the one who makes me cry
You would never ever safe me
All your words are full of lies
You're not the one I wanna marry
Cause baby can't you see
We're just a fantasy
There's nothing we can do
We're not the perfect two (x3)
Baby me and you
We're not the perfect two...


Personally I can't decide between the two. The first is a great song, but so is the second. They're both perfect for the meaning they have. Auburn's song is happy and sweet and a great love song. But Kayla's version is sad and touching and a relatable break-up song. What do you think? Auburn or Kayla? They're both great singers too, which doesn't help...

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:heart: No problem!! Thanks for the cool art :)
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:heart::love: Thank you so much for faving! :love::heart:

:star: Please do have an amazing year ahead of you! :star:
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